To help me get practice to do different roblox art, I have been making things for a cafe i might back. Here is a logo I made!
Please make sure to specify what to work on in your reply.
Please make sure to specify what to work on in your reply.
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The text covers the person in the red shirt’s face.
That aside, this is really nice, I love your art style. Nice job! 
Man, I wish I was able to make this sort of hand-drawn, “cartoony-like” art style. You’re using an app on your tablet or ipad to draw these eh?
Overall, the logo looks very nice and clean. Great use of colours!
Next steps:
- Consider revising the thickness of the white outlining in some parts of the logo, particularly the white outlining of the “Y” in Bakery and the rainbow heart. Try to make the white outlining consistent throughout.
- And as already mentioned, the “Baked” text is covering the character in the red apron.
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Why did you remove the pride heart. It looks better that way. 
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I like this one better. The rainbow heart was unrelated to the bakery. As well as you can now see the second person with the text adjusted!