What’s up? It’s SupieUp! I’ve gotten a lot of feedback saying that I need to improve my hair lighting. So, I’ve took days and days practicing and perfecting my lighting. How have I done? Have I improved? What can I do better? I’d appreciate any form of feedback!
Also, should I consider starting commissions?
You have learned very well according to your previous drawing and it looks great how you used the light and other
You can start little by little as your clients wish to pay you
Nice. Yeah, you’ve improved. Keep up the good work!
A thing I get distracted at is the shadows on the face. You’ve somewhat applied it to the right side of her face, so that’d mean that the lighting was at the upper left side. However, the hair doesn’t contain much lighting.
Another thing is the airbrush. I’m unsure if you purposely made it so that it is outside the line art, as seen on the right part of the hair.
Overall, it looks great! I believe you could start taking commissions.
Your feedback is just what I needed! You motivate me to work even harder, thank you.