Hey! I’m working on a new game, Hair Salon Tycoon, and I would love to hear some feedback from you guys.
The guy smiling looks a bit creepy…
Might scare younger players away.
That’s scary?
I think it looks perfectly fine…
Looks great! I love the bright and happy aesthetic of it all! Keep up the great work!
Icon looks nice, but make the brush handle on the center on the hand, so it looks like he is holding it
Thumbnail can’t load for me, so I can’t say anything
Most game passes look copied. Try to make them a bit different they how they look
I actually really like it! Great job!
Everything is made from scratch.
Looks good to me! I don’t see any criticism I should give you. Good work.
It all looks amazing, though there are some things that stuck out to me as being inconsistent, but may not at all be.
- The hairdresser has a gold chain in the logo but not in the thumbnail
- The title of the game logo is orange, but the lighting theme inside the salon is blue/pink. In your Tech Store game, the title logo and employee uniforms both matched color.
- the first 3 VIP tiers are all crowns but the last one is two combs. It would make more sense to me if all 4 were crowns or hair salon supplies.
I love it! The Icons mixed with the backgrounds create a perfect color scheme that grabs the buyers attention!
Just a suggestion,
WATERMARK IT so people don’t steal your work. Other than that, great job! I love the look and feel of it all!
Its the smile that gets ya lol
The thumbnail makes me think of a vibe game due to the neon lights but quality is quite good.
I just wouldnt want him coming into my room at night
The smile looks so evil but the GFX is super good
This is a really small detail but you can see that the magazine is just a brick if you look at the right edge, maybe try making that more “smoother” so it looks like a real magazine a bit would be cool but I like everything else!
It really looks creepy you kinda shock me to
Dont worry, the barber is just cutting their hair!
yes… with a brush. characters is 30