I’m looking for simple feedback on this small lobby I created in (2 or-so) hours. Any feedback is helpful, but I’m mostly looking for feedback on: Lighting, Building, and Detailing;(Terrain,Building);(Large/Small).
If you’re looking to help me out, that would be amazing. In favor for helping me, I will write your name on one of the tombstones/graves! (Just as a thank you) 
Hello There!
I don’t have any idea about the Concept of the game. Please explain about the game. It really help us to give you a Feedback.
It’s just a simple cartoony-inspired graveyard lobby for an upcoming experience of mine.
Great! I still wonder, what game gonna suit on that lobby. Maybe I will saw you one day on the Top Developers list. 
The vibe is amazing, but I feel there’s missing something, like a prop. It doesn’t feel that occupied around the place for me (it’s fantastic really), but either so it’s amazing, here’s my suggestion to add more prop some fences(wooden), more grass, different types of a gravestone, dead flowers, and webs on the trees (but not too much). Or a abandoned cabin somewhere.
Overall it’s good. 
I felt the same way, it just feels too empty right now but I didn’t know what to add! I will work on these suggestions right now, thank you for these, friend!
I’m most likely going to use this for a simple round based game, I’m not 100% sure yet though!
Honestly this is giving me 2018 egg hunt vibes it looks like a loading screen for a area with the name “The Graveyard” in the corner and the “By: ItsPlasmaRBLX” it really gives me nostalgia and the fact that its cartoony to goes along with that style really well 10/10 2018 egg hunt was one of the best egg hunts in roblox history
To be honest, I noticed this like 10 minutes after I posted this. Everything down to the lighting, the music and the low poly style. I didn’t even mean to do that, but I think it’s a massive win. I’m SUPER happy on how this small project turned out! :.O
I think the lighting style helps this ‘2018 egghunt’ type beat, I should make more and add some of them to my plugin for other’s to use…
If its your first try, then its really good!
This is my 2nd lobby, but 1st time going this detailed, and this style. This time I also made most of the models myself. I think this is one of my best building projects so far! (Best part is that I’m not even a builder lol)
This is my first lobby (about 2 years ago)
Much better! I really like the new props. Nice job!
The tombstones need something… chips, cracks, faded engravings. Something. In a graveyard, they are supposed to be the most interesting thing there, but right now, its the candles.
Great improvement over 2 years!
I believe I’m going to revamp the tombstones, and then place everyone’s name on them!
Definitely in the right direction! Putting names on them will be awesome as well.
Yeah, planning on placing names on them VERY soon! I just need to complete a couple mroe things, I should start working on that in a couple minutes!
This looks so good! I really like the little details like the candles and the people on boulders ect. I would recommend maybe adding something along with the barrier that is already there to prevent players from just walking out of the lobby. Maybe a dark forest from all sides?just a suggestion. Overall really nice 8.7/10!
