Have a listen to my songs! #8

Hello everyone, I havent posted in a while, life has been busy. It so nice to be back, feeling better than ever and i hope you guys do too! Today i would love to show you guys some unfinished songs i have been cooking up and get sum lil feedbacks from yall. Tank you<<<333. And as per usual, HEADPHONES RECOMMENDED!

Forgive myself a hundred times

Vibrante sunshine

I wanted to

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This is great! As a producer i’m nitpicky about mastering, and the brass of “I wanted to” bugged me a bit, a slight lowpass filter would fix that, but otherwise these tracks are very nice and roblox-game-y.

Let’s put this straight to the record:

  • “Forgive myself a hundred times” is doesn’t sound like it has a proper progression; it runs short on the cadences. Other than that, this is delightfully lighthearted but needs to clean up the rumble in the current mix.
  • “Vibrate sunshine” also suffers from approximately the same thing when touching the chords. Also the mix needs to quell those brass well for it to work, because it’s more abrasive than actual warmth.
  • “I wanted to” doesn’t have this issue, but instead has a rather unconventional distribution of panning.