Hmm, looks like a hotels with how the stairs are. Also, the indent/dip to get to the “B” looks too deep.
The scheme looks a little more intriguing though.
I love the new color scheme, the blue and white colors give the building an ‘official’ sense.
I would still look into expanding your side windows and adding a frame similar to the door. This would match the doors and windows. The stairs give the building a whole new stance, which make the building more city like than town place. Due to this change I would add columns to outline the edges of the building, which will keep the design low-poly and give it the impression of appearing more complex.
I think its great progress! Of course, you can take my suggestions however ya like
I was thinking the same exact thing about the Columns!
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I think it’ll definitely suit the style you’re going for, so experiment with that. I also think some trees on each side of the stairs would fit in nice as far as setting when you get to that point.
Looks okay but, to be honest, it’s hard to tell it’s a bank without being told. Maybe instead of a “B”, add a green “$”?
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Hey there @SchwarzWalde.
From what I can see, you did a fair good job. As I see as well it is bland.
You COULD add the following;
Windows
Reflective or tinted windows
Outside
Plants, trees and other things. Maybe a bench or a Lamppost.
Colors
Make the door frame Orange along with a orange ‘B’.
Expand
Maybe expand it with a road, burger hut. Add the power generator on the roof.
Detail
If you are serious about this build add every little detail! Maybe you can build the whole picture.
Rating
6/10. Due to this can be expanded and improved on. In my opinion your rushed it. Go back and add your own details! Make it your own!
Hope you enjoy my feedback.
Jack, Builder and Scripter
ROBLOX Developer
Hmm, that makes sense. Thanks, I’ll probably do that!