Hi, I’m working on a “Camping” style game called “Detention” I’ve built the school and the hallway but I really need help with building the classrooms, I’ve tried a lot of time but I’m not getting the result I want. I need it to fit in with the rest of the builds, Thanks
For a game in that type of style, I’ll say that it looks fantastic.
I think as for the classrooms obviously you could add desks, or tables. You could have posters hanging on the walls, a chalkboard, and some windows.
I don’t really know what else I’d add, it looks good! Nice build.
I would go with the simple classroom layout. Desks in rows with whiteboard in front a few posters on the wall and teachers desk in the back of the classroom.
I’d say use similar wall color as the walls you showed us, but not the same color. I also recommend to use different flooring for the classrooms. And to make the classroom not feel empty, put decor that you would see in a normal classroom.
This is also kinda too bright.
Try to do it darker but with light lamps. The house is bright and it’s not realistic.
But is has good instructions.
Everything else is looking good.
Your “Low Poly School” looks very amazing, i like how you added all the decor and textures to the floor part to look like the (Real Life Schools), as well the details. That’s implemented to your school is really decent! However there is a couple of things i’ll add to your building, so it could look. More detailed and improved a lot more overall. You have done a decent job on your, school and i think it looks really amazing! Here is a couple of designs you could add to your game.
Low Poly School
Know your school looks really detailed, and improved however there could. Be some more decorations in the “Hallway” part but it doesn’t need to be detailed i would suggest you add a clock, panel lights, pictures, trash can, fire alarm button, wet floor sign, camera, wall mount drinking fountain, ect. Those are mostly needed in the hallway part of the school! So it could look more detailed depending on the style. Your going for you could just add a couple, since some schools only have clocks, cameras, fountains, implement in the hallway area but if you plan on adding those to your! School it would look a lot more better. Overall i think the school is very well done i would just add some, exterior details such as bushes, street lights, trash can, bollards, and others but for a camping style. Game yours doesn’t seem to need those just add the decor into the hallway and the classrooms.
Classroom Layout
So i like all the details you added to the school and they look decent, however when adding different details into classrooms. I would just add a simple layout! Seating: Similar to school layouts i would do. Tables in rows with (Teacher) desks in front and shelves implement! On the side of the walls and, the back with “Cork Board” with papers, art work, on it and a chalkboard in front. Try doing those kind of layouts in classrooms and then! You could try changing it up if you plan on doing that but i would, mostly add posters, clocks, ark work, shelves, visual presenter bundle, ect. That’s what mostly the layouts are in (Classrooms) i would just go! With a simple design you don’t have to add much but if. You plan on doing that i gave you some details, you could add to your classrooms to make! It look more better and nice for the students! However if you want to add a different layout, you could do 22 desks in a modified. Horseshoe shape leaving a, small break in the middle and sides of! The desk arrangement to use as walk-through spaces. With teacher desks still in the front, those are two layouts i recommend you do. Just to give you ideas!
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Details
Overall, i really like all of the details that’s implemented to your “Low Poly School” and i think it looks really good, as i said above try adding some clocks, pictures, cameras, shelves, books, chalkboard, ect. So it could look more detailed, If you plan on adding details those are! Some i would recommend you add. Here is a couple, of things i’ll add so your school so it could! Look more better and improved a lot more. Overall i mainly said everything above!!
Decorations
Overall, you have done a amazing job, on your “School” it looks really good those are
just a couple of details, layouts you could add for your (upcoming game hope to see what kind of layout you implement to the classrooms! Those are just a couple of layouts i, listed above you could add. However nicely done on your camping style game. Hope to see what else you add to it anyways great job!
Looks great!
The only thing: you have to add more stuff because it is empty; also my opinion is that making the hallway thinner would help 
The overall design is amazing, add more details to the interior.
In the school hallway, add water fountains, garbage cans, more lockers, surveillance cameras, clocks…etc
In addition, add more rooms, or places such as different classrooms, gymnasium, school library, the pool, and exterior fields.
It’s a very appealing build and I think it’s great!
Interior
You could add a few more extra things to the hallways like bins, posters ect.
Maybe add an open locker to make it look more interesting.
Although I wouldn’t add too many extra doors as for your style of game it’s important to make sure the player knows where to go and won’t be confused on where to go. I think it’s great how it is at the moment(not too many extra doors)
I’d also suggest to change/ experiment with the floor texture because right now it looks a little off to me. I think it’s because of the small bricks and I think the texture would fit better in an outside location but that’s just my opinion.
You could also add more detail on the door handles as they are currently one singular block.
Add some lights on the roof.
Exterior
As far as the exterior goes it’s great as well. It looks very cartoony. At first I thought it was a thumbnail.
The windows look a little odd in my opinion, I think they should look more like this than the middle horizontal part only going half way.
I don’t think there’s much to improve except making a little less bright like a few others have said.
It’s a great start and I wish you good luck on working on your game!
