Help with cafe game

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#1

Hello, i want to make a application center and a loading script but they seem to not be working. I would be very happy if someone could provide a fix.

Application Center Bot Script:

local function chat(text)
	game:GetService("Chat"):Chat(script.Parent, text)
end

local playerName = workspace:WaitForChild("playername").Value

task.wait(3)
chat("Hello, Welcome to Application Centre!")
task.wait(1.5)

local datastore = game:GetService("DataStoreService"):GetDataStore("PlayerData")

local success, err = pcall(function()
	local player = game.Players:FindFirstChild(playerName)
	if not player then
		error("Player not found")
	end

	local userId = player.UserId
	local data = datastore:GetAsync("Rank" .. userId)
	local quiz = player.PlayerGui:WaitForChild("quiz"):WaitForChild("Frame"):WaitForChild("quizframe")

	if data and data.Rank ~= nil then
		if data.Rank ~= "0 Instance" then
			chat("You will start a quiz that contains 10 questions")
			chat("about the cafe and also attitude & behavior in the cafe.")
			task.wait(5)
			chat("We are going to start in..")
			chat("5")
			task.wait(1)
			chat("4")
			task.wait(1)
			chat("3")
			task.wait(1)
			chat("2")
			task.wait(1)
			chat("1")
			task.wait(1)
			chat("The quiz just opened on your screen!")
			player.PlayerGui.quiz.Enabled = true

			local questions = {
				q1 = "What studio made Drinkiez?",
				q1a = "Gold Assassin Studios",
				q1b = "Gold Dominus Studio",
				q1c = "Gold Assassin Studios",
			}

			local question = 1
			local function updateQuestion()
				if questions["q"..question] then
					quiz.question.Text = questions["q"..question]
					quiz.a.Text = questions["q"..question.."a"]
					quiz.b.Text = questions["q"..question.."b"]
				end
			end

			updateQuestion()

			local function checkAnswer(answer)
				if answer == questions["q"..question.."c"] then
					question = question + 1
					if question == 2 then
						datastore:SetAsync("Rank"..userId, 2, {userId})
						player:Kick("Congratulations! You passed the quiz. You got ranked to Trainee!")
					else
						updateQuestion()
					end
				else
					player:Kick("Wrong answer! Please re-attend the quiz.")
				end
			end

			quiz.a.MouseButton1Click:Connect(function()
				checkAnswer(quiz.a.Text)
			end)

			quiz.b.MouseButton1Click:Connect(function()
				checkAnswer(quiz.b.Text)
			end)
		else
			chat("It looks like you did the quiz before, now you need to attend trainings to get higher ranks!")
			task.wait(1.5)
			player:Kick("Visit training centre to get higher ranks!")
		end
	else
		chat("Error: Rank data not found or invalid.")
	end
end)

if not success then
	chat("Error setting or retrieving data from datastore: " .. err)
end

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Loading script main game:

local datastore = game:GetService("DataStoreService"):GetDataStore("PlayerData")
game:GetService("Players").PlayerAdded:Connect(function(plr)
	local intv = Instance.new("IntValue")
	intv.Name = "Rank"
	intv.Value = 0
	intv.Parent = plr

	local intv2 = Instance.new("IntValue")
	intv2.Name = "DrinkiezBucks"
	intv2.Value = 1000
	intv2.Parent = plr

	local success, response = pcall(function()
		local rankData = datastore:GetAsync("Rank" .. plr.UserId)
		local bucksData = datastore:GetAsync("DrinkiezBucks" .. plr.UserId)

		print("Rank data before gsub: ", rankData)
		print("Bucks data before gsub: ", bucksData)

		if rankData then
			local rankString = string.gsub(rankData, "Instance", "")
			print("Rank data after gsub: ", rankString)
			local rankNumber = tonumber(rankString)
			if rankNumber then
				intv.Value = rankNumber
			else
				warn("Invalid rank number after conversion: ", rankString)
			end
		end

		if bucksData then
			local bucksString = string.gsub(bucksData, "Instance", "")
			print("Bucks data after gsub: ", bucksString)
			local bucksNumber = tonumber(bucksString)
			if bucksNumber then
				intv2.Value = bucksNumber
			else
				warn("Invalid bucks number after conversion: ", bucksString)
			end
		end
	end)

	if not success then
		print("Error retrieving data: " .. response)
	end

	-- Set default values if data is not retrieved or is invalid
	if intv.Value == 0 then
		datastore:SetAsync("Rank" .. plr.UserId, "0 Instance")
	end

	if intv2.Value == 1000 then
		datastore:SetAsync("DrinkiezBucks" .. plr.UserId, "1000 Instance")
	end

	if plr.Name == "Spilleparadiss" then
		intv.Value = 12
	end

	if intv.Value ~= 0 then
		local staffCard = game:GetService("ServerStorage"):WaitForChild("Staff Card"):Clone()
		staffCard.Parent = plr:WaitForChild("Backpack")
	end
end)

Logs:

  21:09:29.966  Requiring asset 6330938629.
Callstack:
Workspace.DWProx - OfficeDoorDouble.Settings.Script, line 7
Workspace.DWProx - OfficeDoorDouble.Settings.Script, line 7
Workspace.DWProx - OfficeDoorDouble.Settings.Script, line 7
  -  Server - Script:7
  21:09:29.967  Requiring asset 5918376498.
Callstack:
Workspace.DWProx - OfficeDoorDouble.DWProx.Settings.Loader, line 8
Workspace.DWProx - OfficeDoorDouble.DWProx.Settings.Loader, line 8
Workspace.DWProx - OfficeDoorDouble.DWProx.Settings.Loader, line 8
  -  Server - Loader:8
  21:09:30.786  ShowcaseBaseplate  -  Server
  21:09:30.786  PrototypeBaseplate  -  Server
  21:09:30.786  2021 Baseplate  -  Server
  21:09:30.786  Anime Baseplate  -  Server
  21:09:30.787  [DWProx V3] HTTP Notice: Http Check Successful!  -  Server - DWPROXV3-HANDLER:8
  21:09:30.836  Requiring asset 6036649147.
Callstack:
Workspace.DWProx - OfficeDoorDouble.DWProx.Settings.DWPROXV3-ENGINE, line 8
Workspace.DWProx - OfficeDoorDouble.DWProx.Settings.DWPROXV3-ENGINE, line 8
Workspace.DWProx - OfficeDoorDouble.DWProx.Settings.DWPROXV3-ENGINE, line 8
Workspace.DWProx - OfficeDoorDouble.DWProx.Settings.DWPROXV3-ENGINE, line 8
Workspace.DWProx - OfficeDoorDouble.DWProx.Settings.DWPROXV3-ENGINE, line 8
Workspace.DWProx - OfficeDoorDouble.DWProx.Settings.DWPROXV3-ENGINE, line 8
  -  Server - DWPROXV3-ENGINE:8
  21:09:31.061  ShowcaseBaseplate  -  Client
  21:09:31.061  PrototypeBaseplate  -  Client
  21:09:31.061  2021 Baseplate  -  Client
  21:09:31.061  Anime Baseplate  -  Client
  21:09:31.071  Requiring asset 5588673109.
Callstack:
Workspace.DWProx - OfficeDoorDouble.DWProx.Settings.DWPROXV3-ENGINE, line 8
Workspace.DWProx - OfficeDoorDouble.DWProx.Settings.DWPROXV3-ENGINE, line 8
Workspace.DWProx - OfficeDoorDouble.DWProx.Settings.DWPROXV3-ENGINE, line 8
Workspace.DWProx - OfficeDoorDouble.DWProx.Settings.DWPROXV3-ENGINE, line 8
Workspace.DWProx - OfficeDoorDouble.DWProx.Settings.DWPROXV3-ENGINE, line 8
Workspace.DWProx - OfficeDoorDouble.DWProx.Settings.DWPROXV3-ENGINE, line 8
  -  Server - DWPROXV3-ENGINE:8
  21:09:31.115  Rank data before gsub:  0 Instance  -  Server - playerload:17
  21:09:31.115  Bucks data before gsub:  1000 Instance  -  Server - playerload:18
  21:09:31.116  Rank data after gsub:  0   -  Server - playerload:22
  21:09:31.116  Bucks data after gsub:  1000   -  Server - playerload:33

I also tried using a popular AI website you know, but he didnt help to much.

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#2

What exactly doesn’t work about it? Do you have any errors?

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#3

I just updated the post with a screenshot and logs for these scripts.

#4

What is the data you’re trying to retrieve from the DataStore? If you are intending to get a group rank, you should use GetRankInGroup. However if you are storing a separate rank system, you must have either formatted the key wrong for either setting/getting, or you haven’t stored anything at all for that player as your code indicates there was no data stored.

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#5

Money and ranks i think, im not really a professional programmer and some of the work was done by a popular chatbot.

#6

also i dont use groups to store the ranks i use datastore service.

#7

I see your problem. You are storing the rank as a string, but trying to reference Rank as if it was stored in a dictionary. On this line: if data and data.Rank ~= nil then - remove and data.Rank ~= nil and also change data.Rank ~= "0 Instance" on the line below to simply data ~= "0 Instance". This is because data should be the rank, unless nothing is stored.

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#8

do you mean like that? but now the script doesnt work.

local function chat(text)
	game:GetService("Chat"):Chat(script.Parent, text)
end

local playerName = workspace:WaitForChild("playername").Value

wait(20)
chat("Hello, Welcome to Application Centre!")
task.wait(1.5)

local datastore = game:GetService("DataStoreService"):GetDataStore("PlayerData")

local success, err = pcall(function()
	local player = game.Players:FindFirstChild(playerName)
	if not player then
		error("Player not found")
	end

	local userId = player.UserId
	local data = datastore:GetAsync("Rank" .. userId)
	local quiz = player.PlayerGui:WaitForChild("quiz"):WaitForChild("Frame"):WaitForChild("quizframe")

	if data ~= nil then
		if data ~= "0 Instance" then
			chat("You will start a quiz that contains 10 questions")
			chat("about the cafe and also attitude & behavior in the cafe.")
			task.wait(5)
			chat("We are going to start in..")
			chat("5")
			task.wait(1)
			chat("4")
			task.wait(1)
			chat("3")
			task.wait(1)
			chat("2")
			task.wait(1)
			chat("1")
			task.wait(1)
			chat("The quiz just opened on your screen!")
			player.PlayerGui.quiz.Enabled = true

			local questions = {
				q1 = "What studio made Drinkiez?",
				q1a = "Gold Assassin Studios",
				q1b = "Gold Dominus Studio",
				q1c = "Gold Assassin Studios",
			}

			local question = 1
			local function updateQuestion()
				if questions["q"..question] then
					quiz.question.Text = questions["q"..question]
					quiz.a.Text = questions["q"..question.."a"]
					quiz.b.Text = questions["q"..question.."b"]
				end
			end

			updateQuestion()

			local function checkAnswer(answer)
				if answer == questions["q"..question.."c"] then
					question = question + 1
					if question == 2 then
						datastore:SetAsync("Rank"..userId, 2, {userId})
						player:Kick("Congratulations! You passed the quiz. You got ranked to Trainee!")
					else
						updateQuestion()
					end
				else
					player:Kick("Wrong answer! Please re-attend the quiz.")
				end
			end

			quiz.a.MouseButton1Click:Connect(function()
				checkAnswer(quiz.a.Text)
			end)

			quiz.b.MouseButton1Click:Connect(function()
				checkAnswer(quiz.b.Text)
			end)
		else
			chat("It looks like you did the quiz before, now you need to attend trainings to get higher ranks!")
			task.wait(1.5)
			player:Kick("Visit training centre to get higher ranks!")
		end
	else
		chat("Error: Rank data not found or invalid.")
	end
end)

if not success then
	chat("Error setting or retrieving data from datastore: " .. err)
end

also i have a another script (application centre) which is in server script service

game:GetService("Players").PlayerAdded:Connect(function(plr)
	task.wait(1.5)
	plr.Character.HumanoidRootPart.Anchored = true
	task.wait(3)
	local stringv = Instance.new("StringValue")
	stringv.Name = "playername"
	stringv.Parent = workspace
	stringv.Value = plr.Name
end)
#9

Is there a different error now, if so what line? Also print data and let me know what it is.

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#10

21:31:44.648 0 Instance Instance - Server - Script:2
Seems weird.
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