I am making my first game and I wanted some feedback on the lobby I made.
Thanks in advance!
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The lobby looks good! Blocky montains and a cool little shop! 
Don’t look bad but I think you should try to put some textures and also make another type of montains to be cool just like the trees! 
You can learn + get some tips by watching a developer that helps a lot in building and modeling called RoBuilder!
But since it’s your first time making it, I still think that looks very cool. Hope you can make more cooler with a little bit of my feedback! 
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Hello, First of all, WOW,
The first time I tried to make something good, it pretty much looked like this:
In my opinion, everything blends well together, but I’d say to change the mountains a little bit.
I’ve noticed some small imperfections that might just make your game look better.
After all, details are important.
Here's the first one:
Try to close the gap.
I’ve also noticed that the surface of the grass and the surface of the dirt are parallel.
One last thing is to add more mountains.
As of now, since some mountains are very low, the player can see behind them and stare in the bottomless void that is in roblox games 
Try adding just a bit of mountains behind the lower ones, and maybe add some trees on them too.
It does look good though, If you’ve made the models too, my congratulations to you.
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The lobby is very nice. It has a charming atmosphere, but there are a few problems.
- It’s too blocky
- It may be a bit too dark for the lobby. Besides, try changing the skybox to something more cartoonish.
- The low-poly rocks & trees do not go well with the rest of their surroundings, so you may want to add a few imperfections to the cliffs or mountains (Not sure how to call them.) But try making them less blocky and have a more polygonal texture to them.
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look’s great.
the only thing I think you should do is make things a little more bright
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It looks to blocky. Add some meshes with more shapes and detail. There is too many straight lines.
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