Good evening everyone. Sorry for my bad English but I use the google translator because I am dyslexic.
I definitely made a game and I would be delighted what you all think of it. The game is called Lumberjack Tycoon. I have read a lot here in the forum and it has helped me a lot to learn programming and implement it.
I would be happy if there are suggestions for improvement or whether it is very bad, or is it good?
Falls jemand Deutsch spricht ist es für mich einfacher! Danke!
Here is the Link: Lumberjack Tycoon[ALPHA] - Roblox
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You can’t play the game… have you made it public?
One: Your loading screen is too long
Two: Your game trees don’t cut
Three: The music isn’t right you have lots of copywrited music
Four: You shouldn’t use free models its a bad habbit
Me: You should not go for the big project as your first game! You should keep this in mind your not gonna make the whole adopt me as your first game but maybe your 100th game will!
I can change the loading screen, that’s no problem.
I put a lady there to explain which trees can be felled, but you’re right. It should be made simpler. I’ll work on that tomorrow. The ax has to touch the tree, I’ve already tried an animation where the ax goes straight through the tree, but that didn’t work the way I wanted it to, I can’t find a better solution at the moment. But I’ve been working on this game for almost 2 months, 6 hours a day.
Well, because of the music, that’s royalty free music in Germany. Partly from Roblox too, but I’ll change it.
I found it to be the easiest because of the free models. But I’m already working on my own models.
I can imagine that it won’t be the most successful game. But for the first time I think it’s good.
I have improved the tree felling system. Now you have to pick up the ax and click on the trees.
The loading times of the Welcome Screen are reduced.
The rest will follow.