Horror Game 1/2 Done Opinions

This is a horror game i made! Its halfway done. Go gimme feedback :smiley:

(20) Dark O’l Dellik - Roblox

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Not bad game. What’s with the vibration effect?

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You already scared me in the first 5 seconds of walking out of the bedroom. :cold_sweat:

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There was a black shadowy creature with white eyes lol

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I saw. :pensive:

Very good game but work on house look @BMWLux

edit: oh lord I just made it downstairs what is that thing?
@warmasterx11 hey uh is there anything in the bedroom once i come back to it?

Honestly, the constant vibrating camera is annoying. I get you’re trying to create emotion using it, but it’s just annoying to me and giving me a headache. Add to that the light from the lantern going bright and dark to the same vibration.

I wouldn’t call this a half-done game. I’d call this a draft build. the grip on the lantern is not correct. The bedroom door is a mile thick, and all the colors just bleed together. The house needs a lot of work to be an actual game, and there’s no real game yet.

On the good side, you did good in thinking of the music early, since that’s going to be important to any game, but especially in a horror game. And, the story seems to be a good setup to the game.

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did u find da notes? :smile: they creepy.

Yes, but I couldn’t read it . The text size was too small

I like it! Maybe lower down with the vibration. :flushed:

Not a fan of the vibration, but other than that, it’s pretty solid.

So far it’s really good! But there are some things that need improvement. The bedroom (spawn area) needs different materials. The floor and the walls shouldn’t be the same color or material. Also (in my opinion) you should add fog (game.Lighting.FogStart = 10, game.Lighting.FogEnd = 50/80 or something like that, game.Lighting.FogColor = 0,0,0

It’s really good. But make please a version with first person! Thats better (I find)