Hotel Denouement [FEEDBACK]

Hotel Denouement {SHOWCASE} - Roblox Please rate my game! It would be appreciated! I want to improve myself in building. This build is based off a book/netflix series.

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Well, there wasn’t a ton of stuff to judge the place on. So far, it looks ok. I noticed some of the bricks are askew, specifically on the little pillars with the wedges. I can’t tell if this was intentional but I think outlines are still on. Personally, they look kinda weird to me. You can turn them off in Lighting. ALSO…from the preview thumbnail, there are these huge dark patches due to a lack of proper lighting. I suggest surface lights over a bunch of point lights. Finally, for the light posts, you can save a lot of time with the archimedes plugin when it comes to making those fancy details that connect the light to the post.

Thank you for your feedback! I kinda noticed the lighting was weird. But i am trying to get better at it overall, so thank you!!