Hey, I have been working on this for longer than I would like to admit. But I feel like something is missing, what could I do to make it look better?
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It looks great and it’s a design I’ve never seen. I feel like the baseplate need to be more light greenish. Also, maybe you could add a Noob smashed against the camera to give the explosion scene more effect!
Maybe add some rubble or dust effects over it and add a slight motion blur to make it look more chaotic.
There’s already a noob flying but I can probably do that.
Hm, I’ll try. Any app recommendations? Or would PDN get the job done?
I use photoshop, but I’ve also heard about illustrator.
I revamped it a little but I couldn’t figure out the dust/smoke/rubble…
i should’ve removed the depth of field tbh
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You shouldn’t be able to see the parts inside the explosion. There should be a lot of saturation there, almost blinding
Check my reply to Vothern, should look better.
I already saw it, there should be a really bright light in the explosion you shouldn’t be able to see through it at all. Nothing should be visible in it.
If you take a look at this explosion, you’ll probably see what I’m talking about:
Notice how nothing is visible inside of the explosion, that’s what I’m talking about
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So you want me to make the smoke more, including the blast which results in less transparency inside the explosion. Sure.
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