How can i imporve my Simulator models?

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#1

Hello :roblox:
i just made these simulator models but idk if it is perfect enough.
What do you think can improve to make it better?

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thanks!
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#2

They are acceptable for a simulator game. I say it is good enough. I suggest some bushes and grass.

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#3

Yeah good idea i maybe adding those later!:+1:

#4

Nothing is “perfect enough”. But I personally think they look really good. You might want to add more environmental features, other than that it’s great. :stuck_out_tongue:

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#5

They are really good :3 ,but your trees need some improvements.For me they are a bit too angled (Too many angles on the leaves), you could smooth them , but in general,great job :smiley:

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#6

Everything is decent, but the tree with a extra branch is too simple. Add a generic, random shape to the leaves, would look better in my opinion.

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#7

Work on the grass on the rocks. They don’t look like grass at all and more like icing on a doughnut.
I also suggest adding some buildings, bushes and more grass on the ground, as it looks very empty.
The trees need to be more varied.

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#8

I personally think, that you could make these models for your simulator game:

  • Rocks
  • Grass
  • More unique trees, instead of repeating just the same tree, which can make design little bit boring.
  • Fences
  • Gates for fences

As your already existing models, they are really good. Not perfect, but I personally like it.

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#9

Feedback

First of all, I would like to start by saying that the wood on the bench is sticking out on the sides, secondly you could make the trees slightly more advanced and you could add some decoration to the leaderboard.
Next, the lamp posts, they look a bit too simple on the lamps and look a bit ‘weird’, I think that you could give the lamp a different shape and see how it goes, next you could add some rocks and grass.

Lighting

As for the lighting I feel like you could make it somewhat more realistic, by that I mean that you could make the lighting a bit more yellowy-orange and make the shadows a bit sharper (but not too much)

Conclusion

Overall I think that you have done a great job and that there are a few places to improve on, you could also make more assets to the simulator because at the moment the map looks a bit too small for a simulator game. (unless this is just a start)

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The bench with wood sticking out on the sides.

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The lamp on the lamp post
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The leaderboard
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#10

Thanks!
By the leaderboard the thing sticking outside is a wooden thing behind it as decoration
And the bench i can change
And u are right the lamp can have a change too

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