im working on a game right now where you make pizzas what could i change/add/remove
https://www.mediafire.com/file/jxynuljt8lkxgh6/Roblox-2025-05-10T09_03_10.189Z.mp4/file video of my work because to big to upload
You want us to download a file to give you feedback? especially from mediafire? nuh uh, even if its a mp4.
Can you provide some kind of preview option like google drive has? That would be better.
But the best option is your game link, so we can test it out ourselves and find any bugs and problems.
ok i brb to do that sorry about that
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done
try again ok? tell if work
just upload it as unlisted to youtube bro
it works.
Anyway, the game looks nice, but I have some critiques.
First off, theres no UI, it makes the game seem bland and empty.
The music is very loud, at least from the video you put, maybe tone it down.
Some of the music doensnt match the game in my opinion, switch some tracks out maybe.
Putting orders as names for NPCs looks bad, try using BillboardGuis for that.
When you take out the pizza from the stove, theres no indication that its done, might be confusing.
Spawning NPCs right at the door with no walk in animation makes it look unfinished and bad.
The building seems very empty, and only the option to make pepperoni pizza, add more ingredients so its more fun and spice up the building.
The spawn location right in the middle of the restaurant kills the vibe, make it transparent or change it so its not the default one.
Add animations, as the game seems unpolished without them.
The outside seems very dark and the use of free models doesnt fit the restaurant build at all in my opinion, make it brighter and change up the buildings, itll look better.
And just personal prefrence, change the pizza designs, as they literally look like a copy of Work at a Pizza Place ones.
And if you dont have a Main Menu, add one so it looks more polished and nicer
Im probably not even counting the bugs, because I cant play test the game, but this is a solid start. You have a lot to improve, keep working on it, good job.
Bro theres a dupe topic youll get moderated
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