How can I improve my game's ad?

I made this ad for my game Entropy Vessel. I’m pretty new to the ad-making scene so I’m not really sure if there are key elements that I should shoot for. If someone more experienced could critique it before I run it, that would be lovely.
EntropyVesselShowcase

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This is what I think your game is based on that ad:

A military/ gun themed horror puzzle escape game

Well that’s exactly what it is so that’s a good sign!

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You should show any idea on why there’s a soldier, and put a background of any game’s stage.

  1. Make the text on the “Entropy Vessel” smaller, to fit the screen.
  2. Make helicopter smaller to fit as well.
  3. Brighten up the soldier with a gun to emphasize.
  4. Change the font of all the text because they don’t quiet make sense when a player scrolls or stumbles upon it.
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