How can i improve my game
Is it fun to play? Will it keep people is the game? That’s my question so i am asking u to go checkout my game, and tell me tips & tricks to make it even better.
My obby : Fun Obby! - Roblox
It currently has 76 stages.
Bye have a nice day.
I think the obby is appealing to the younger audience, but not so much for the teen-adult audience.
And is this good or not? Or is it better to be for the teen-adult audience?
The game is good. There isn’t really such thing as a “bad” game, as everyone has their fair share of opinions.
To clear things up, I meant that your build style and color choice is most definitely more appealing to the younger audience, meaning it’s better for the younger audience.
Ok, thank you so much for ur feedback. Bye and have a nice day, and goodluck.
My feedback:
I love the “popping” sound when player dies. The only things you should add is background music and tween position of menu when “Donate Robux” button is clicked. And yeah, when GUI button is clicked, add a small sound effect so that player can hear that he/she clicked the button. Overall a nice built obby!
I know about the background music but i just don’t know what the best music is to pick that is why i didn’t do background music. But now i will try and search more for the background music. And what u said about the button hen u click it i actually dont know how to make a sound when the clicked the button but i will search for yt tutorials. Thank you so much for ur feedback. Have a nice day and goodluck.
Your game is pretty awesome. Add a lobby, a winner’s area and more stages, and you’re good to go! I also agree with what @alxzile said
I feel like you’re just starting to develop and i’ve gotta say, you’ll have a bright future ahead of you!
I suggest you use calming but adventurous music
Ok i will try and make a lobby at the beginning of the stage and i won’t make a winners area now bc its not done i will do this when the game is all done. Thx for ur feedback. Have a nice day and do ur best. 
But i dont know where to find that. So can u send me a link of the sound u think goes best with my game pls? Tysm for the good feedback.
I can’t find any links but i suggest you use NCS Release and Kevin MacLeod. I’m sure you’ll find the right music for your game
Ok tysm for ur help and feedback. I appreciate it. And do i need to search it on roblox
Ow i already found it on roblox. Thank you so much for ur feedback.
I agree with most other people here, it definitely is designed for a young audience. I like the range of colours but personally, I think the obby should be longer, harder and include some music.
Yeah i know but im still working on it i just published it bc i want to know what people think of it. So i know im doing it good or bad. And if im doing good i will progress it further like i am doing now. But still thx for giving feedback.
As @EpicFin565 already mentioned, add music.
I find that the first stage was pretty hard in comparison to the others, not hard but it requires some dying so you can figure out which path is the one that’s collideable. I wouldn’t put something like that at the beginning, I’m not really an expert, but I don’t think it’s the best thing to add something that requires dying at the start of the obby. It kinda kills the mood of completing the obby, you know.
Stage 12 is pretty hard imo, especially the last jump.
Good work on the obby, it’s fun to play and stuff but the problem with many obbies is that people don’t come back to them, usually.
I would recommend to maybe add a Shop or something like that, you know what I mean.
I did add music now. And i know stage 12 is a hard one so i am gonna delete stage 12 put stage 1 in stage 12 and make a new stage at stage 1. Tysm for this feedback it is really helpful.
Made it to stage 31, maybe you should tween a GUI to the screen with something that says something like “You did it!!! Congrats!”, you get what I mean.
Also, maybe it’d look smoother if you tweened the progress bar, so the green line wouldn’t jump, it would smoothly tween.
I get it but that’s not the end of the game at all i just wanted some feedback on how i am doing now but i will make the game much longer than it is. And at the end i will do what u said like “You made the obby congrats!” And it is really helpful bc i didnt really think of that so, thank you. Have a nice day. And the problem is i don’t know how to make it smoothly tween so can u send a link of a yt video that explain it or send me a script bc, i really don’t know how to make that but it’s an amazing idea. Keep up the good work.