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#1

This is my ability that I made, question is how can I improve it maybe add more vfx, or somehow improve the lift I want it to look as good as possible so give me some hints please

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#2

Hi, I have some tips:

  1. Make particles fly out from the ground where the wall spawned
  2. Make the wall slightly shake left and right repeatedly
  3. I think that the player shouldnt punch the ground when the animation is finished
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#3

This work looks great! If you can and want to, make it so the player doesn’t go back down after the wall is up. Other than that, nice job on this!

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#4

The last part of the animation when the player hits the ground - nothing happens lol. Maybe its supposed to signal that the wall is constructed or something but you could add some effects there at the end or reinforce the wall or something. Or just remove that last bit. That’d make it better in my opinion

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#5

Looks great. Other than the lol, izNatt has a point. The first part looks so good the last movement seems out of place.

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#6

I would suggest to add

1.SFX
2.Particles (when the wall is rising)

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