How can I improve my work?

Help and Feedback Creations Feedback
#1

I believe my work is reasonable priced, but I don’t get many commissions. What could I do to improve my work?
Ro-Flix

Screen Shot 2020-08-22 at 4.49.49 PM
Screen Shot 2020-08-22 at 4.49.49 PM2210×1240 215 KB

STAR WARS
Screen Shot 2020-08-10 at 12.56.22 PM
Screen Shot 2020-08-10 at 12.56.22 PM2132×1194 1.49 MB

Screen Shot 2020-08-13 at 11.11.47 AM
Screen Shot 2020-08-13 at 11.11.47 AM2334×1310 963 KB

ROLTA
Screen Shot 2020-08-29 at 8.58.27 PM
Screen Shot 2020-08-29 at 8.58.27 PM2306×1266 3.14 MB

Screen Shot 2020-09-04 at 2.03.32 PM
Screen Shot 2020-09-04 at 2.03.32 PM1656×934 841 KB

Screen Shot 2020-08-29 at 8.59.44 PM
Screen Shot 2020-08-29 at 8.59.44 PM2302×1264 2.73 MB

(Store UI)
Screen Shot 2020-08-30 at 12.11.06 PM
Screen Shot 2020-08-30 at 12.11.06 PM840×452 137 KB

(ADMIN PANEL)
Screen Shot 2020-08-30 at 12.56.40 PM
Screen Shot 2020-08-30 at 12.56.40 PM691×391 66.8 KB

3 Likes
#2

Can you show some examples of your work here? I can’t give feedback unless I can diagnose the issue.

#3

I linked my portfolio, but I’ll add photos.
Edit: Added them.

1 Like
#4

They look ok. They lack diversity and color though. The voting panel is pretty cramped, maybe extend the edges of that a bit so it looks less squished. In the GFX loading screen, it could use better lighting, but otherwise, I like that one. Roflix could use some layout diversity, but otherwise it looks pretty good. Basically, brighten things up, make things less cramped, and more colors. I would say RoFlix is your best work, but the buttons at the top are too small and need to be proportional to the show selections. Try using complementary colors.

#5

This is my honest opinion.

Smooth corners isn’t really necessarily better, and you overused it, especially here:

image
image736×452 326 KB

image
image
image782×88 10.1 KB

There is a lack of consistency:
(sharp and smooth)
image

The text isn’t consistent:
image
image

And then there is the padding, which is also inconsistent:
image

The main things you have to improve on are:

  1. Consistency
  2. Padding
  3. Theme
#6

I can help you to improve as a customer because I m not Ui designer.
First one Ro-Flix :
Do more like the real Netflix

image
image1200×661 631 KB
they have a bigger hole because yours look like all series/films are together and for eye isn’t very good. And also you have a black background that make little annoying, do like netflix, they did gray but with some variation darker and lighter and that make more esthetics.

Next one for Starwars:
Maybe try an different background because it look like strange the map like that, put an good picture of the scenery (maybe its moving background so don’t change maybe)
Next Rolta :
First button ( menu, store, …) Do it like they don’t look like the background, I mean more attractive for eyes. And for the vote map, do the vote more visuale like make a gray semi-transparent background to see me the map vote.
For Store Ui :
The principal handler window its too block near of all button who are circular and button make a hole like they floating in the window.
And for the Admin panel:
Maybe add some colors because its too black / gray.

That all I can tell for me, continu your great work :slight_smile: and sorry for my trash english :sweat_smile:

1 Like