How can I improve this build?

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#1

So hi guys, I’m trying to improve my low poly build (I think), can you help me?

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#2

Hello Developer,

Thanks for reaching out to Roblox Developer Forums, as a way to gain feedback and suggestions on your work, as there are plenty of developers who are willing to help you with your builds.

At the first glance, the buildings look fine as they are, they fit the low-poly theme, if you’re specifically going for that look.

What I do suggest you to improve though, is to:

  • Add frames around the windows of the yellow houses

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  • Try a red-ish roof and if you don’t like it, try a whiter yellow.

  • Try to add just a tiny bit more detail on the doors if you would like it a bit fancier.like this:

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  • Try adding chimneys on the yellow builds if you’d like

  • Make sure that you don’t always have the same building in every block [if you’re doing something, which requres a lot of houses and builds] Try to recolor them, rebuild them, etc.

  • You could add a little garden infront of the yellow buildings or a backyard.

  • You could try doing a balcony on the back as well

These are ideas, but I’d appreciate it if you would consider them!

Thanks for reading and goodluck!

Sincerely,
CrashFacts

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#3

add a edge to the bottom of the wall

if you look at ur houses on the left the far left is obviously superior to the one in the middle and the one on the far right better than the one on the far left

use ur one on the far right as a sample and change the shape and size of ur windows as well as changing colour + more edges

low poly doesnt mean same shapes, detail on ur roof is good, just needs difference

add a step to ur door maybe?

as said above extra detail around the house, maybe a fence wouldn’t go amiss

try a driveway??? or a road to the door?

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