How Can I Improve This Design?

i took inspo from one of my extremely older designs:

older design

commission 2 HavenRise

ice

any feedback would really be appreciated!! tried out a new style today :slight_smile:

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I think it looks pretty good, I’m not a girl so I don’t really know what to look for on female clothing

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I would recommend removing the skin tone part, so everyone could wear it.

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It’s on a mannequin so everyone could see it, when you upload it there is no skin part. It’s commonly used in clothing design to showcase work in a more organized and professional manner.

This is an outfit on a mannequin:
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And this is what it looks like uploaded:

I love this outfit, it’s perfect for country girls. The fringe (looks more like loose string, but I guess you could call it that) is also a nice touch.

I think you should mess around with the colors a bit, though, I personally don’t like to do blue and blue together. Maybe make the top a sage color or instead of blue.

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Very cute
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Here’s some tips
-Your shading is very bone straight;
Try making it curve in its middle and make them curve in different size :yum:

Also try making your sleeves have a unique shape instead of rectangles

Also try practice making shoes
But in this outfit ig its ok to leave out shoes

Ooo you could also prob add a waist chain

Also the string on the waist could possible be more straighten than curvy

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I was actually doing a mini remake of one of my older designs, and the original colors were blue and blue

I’ll probably do a few different colors of the top when I upload it and will definitely do sage!! thanks for suggesting that :slight_smile:

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Who knows if it’s female clothing? :flushed:

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shading is a bit difficult for me but i can for sure do that if i put a little more effort/time into my designs

waist chain is such a good idea omg, definitely doing that in the future!! i was trying to figure out what else to add since it seemed a bit low on the accessory side so ty!!

and i suck at shoes sm but i’ll try to work on those more

tysm for the tips!! :slight_smile:

Oh, I see! I was just suggesting it, if it’s a remake then I’d say it’s pretty nice! Though, you should probably mention it in the original post. I normally use contrast as a way to make an outfit look less muted and more eye catching.

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i added the design i was remaking, and in the future that’s actually a really helpful tip (contrasting), so thank you!

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