How can I improve this?

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no feedback is needed this is a real gigachad masterpiece

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please be serious D:

i am very very very serious, this is pure gigachad art

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I like that style of drawing! the first one, how about make arm little more short? It looks little bit long
and I think it’d be better to draw tin pot more little sharper and fit on head!
Second one, looks good! I think it’d be better equalize the line size.

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Honestly, this is really good and I’ll pay you for a commission to make one for my character. Your style is unique and that’s what the platform needs more than ever without the generic, over the top drawings.

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Thanks for the feedback, but Im not doing commissions right now.

I can’t even draw hair or complex things yet, and Im still practicing. I’ll tell you if I do ever open commissions up though, but that may take a while.

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alright! if i’m being honest, this is the type of art i exactly want to be drawn of my character so make sure to keep me updated!

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Not an artist but what I really think would make these characters pop out is making the shadows of the hands a little bit more obvious to the eye (I’m talking about the second drawing, not the first, I think the first drawing is amazing)

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