I need some tips on how I can make my Ads better because they both have an awful CTR (.32)
Any feedback is welcome! I know they arent the greatest and thats why I have come to the forum… I need help.
Thanks,
Baboons
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how long has your ads been up since you’ve check
The 24 hrs just finished, I did the last 3 days of 200 robux on each one. So a total of 1200 robux for the 2 ads in the last 3 days
it would be cool if you could make to make 3D Renders their easy to do.
Yeah I made these ads probably a month ago, I recently learned blender so the next ad I create will have better models…
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Disclaimer: I know nothing about ads, this is purely from the standpoint of a consumer.
A couple of things that you might want to consider:
- Logo continuity. I noticed that “Thinkmania” is written in 2 different ways across both ads. I think keeping things the same would make it easier to build recognition among players.
- Design and flow. This one is a bit more complicated to explain, but basically, the ads don’t draw my attention to any particular call to action (CTA).
- Expenditure. After reading what other devs/players put into advertising on-platform, it seems like 1200 might not be a big enough budget, especially for 2 separate ads.
In the first ad, my eyes first are drawn towards the three characters, then are split between the “join now” button (which is a CTA) and the text on the left.
My recommendation for ad 1 would be to consider emphasizing the name of the brand and the join button by having them on the same side, and perhaps putting more weight on the CTA (either by changing the color, shape, or something else.
In the second ad, my eyes are all over the place, splitting between the “before” and “after” photos.
My recommendation for ad 2 would be to consider cutting down on the text, and instead opting for a big CTA instead.
Hope this helps!
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Thank you so much for this reply! I will be sure to edit these ads and implement the changes you recommended 
The use of colors looks like it was made in 2016 or early 2010’s.
The “Before and After” concept makes people think not that much time went into this.
Maybe change the text font and images of players?
That’s all I have to say though, idk if I helped.
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Texts are nice, although about the render, not so much… Add shadows to the render! Also i’m not understanding if you cropped the images or you actually rendered the characters? For the 1st add, for “Join Now” the text looks very stretchy like, maybe try to get it in a good size?
Lastly, add shadow drop or outline on texts to make it stand out more. 1st one’s shadow to “All Clothes UNDER” is very hard to notice, maybe make the outline color white so it stands out the text.
(These are all ways to make the art better, don’t take it as I’m being rude or mean)
Goodluck! 
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The ‘before’ and ‘after’ thing is really annoying now, try and different approach. Ads like before and after won’t do well.
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