How can I make this map look better?

im liking it but i wanna improve the feeling when ur there but idk how


update: here is link The Pit - Roblox

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That looks good, Maybe add tons of fire/lava particles, Script something so it moves like a light or something dunno

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i think i fixed it

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Woah, pretty cool creation there! Did you use Roblox to create this? Anyways, this build is amazing! Keep up the good work and I can’t wait for further creations.

Answering your question on how to improve the build, some of the terrain just looks too flat on the top. Maybe make it a little more bumpy instead of an unnatural flat shape.

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Making the fog thinner/making it easier to see will also allow the particles and stuff you added to show up more, I think this might make it look nicer as well.

Looks really amazing though, keep up the great work!

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I didn’t really get the theme (apologies), but I’ll take it a guess to be somewhat of a dystopia.

Looking great!
As a suggestion you may add some buildings, more terrain which is distinguishable in the map and visible.
That’s all I could give for now.

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I’m getting Lord of The Rings vibes, what with the tower and eye-shaped thing. Overall, looks pretty good, keep it up!

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Try to add something to the sky…

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