How can this intro be inproved?

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#1

Hey!

So I recently made this game intro for any games I make in my group! I think the animations and tweens are done but I think the ui kind of looks bad? What are your options? What should I change? I hired someone to the logo and I really like it but I dont know if its the backround or the presents text but it just does not seem right.

Video: https://lowkey.gg/v/0f5ff1ee-3435-404a-b492-b69456ee8671

Thanks!

  • Alex
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#2

First thing I would do is set “IgnoreGuiInset” to true so it covers the top bar as well.
Second thing would be to possibly speed up the animation if using elastic, or change it to Back.

Other than that it looks nice!

Here's an intro I made the other day for fun

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#3

The background looks pretty plain, maybe add a gradient or something to spice it up.

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#4

Thanks! I took your suggestions and it looks better! Also, how did you do your animations rotation effect? Is that just like a image label that rotations with a tween? How did you do the text changing its color to the backround? Its super cool!

#5

BounceInto.rbxm (5.4 KB)
Take a look for yourself!

Anyone, feel free to use it.

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#6

I was just about to take your suggestion and try this but I accidently closed studio and lost all my progress. Lol I just did the most basic mistake. Before I closed it I did try the backround and it looked great so thank you for the suggestion.

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#7

Did you check your auto saves?

#8

I did and sadly it was not there. Its ok though.

#9

Hey. Here’s a tip.
Whenever developing, turn on team create.
Whenever you close Roblox studio or it crashes, nothing is lost because as soon as studio is closed in team create, it automatically saves.

It’s very useful! Trust me!

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#10

I think it’s something to do with the text personally. Logo looks good though

#11

Definitely remove the line up top, and the text could look a bit more animated/professional. But for the rest, it looks amazing! :cookie: you deserve this.

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#12

Presents font is uh, gross.

There’s a lot of better text selection on ROBLOX nowadays trust me.

The loading the UI Image looks great, something my game needs for the future for sure.

#13

I agree the font is bad. I made that quickly in paint.net so I might just use roblox font or something.

#14

Yes, I find that ROBLOX games look better using the TextFont instead of Images.

There’s a bit of a quality decrease on images rather than a text ROBLOX provides. Plus with Mobile scaling, it makes it easier.