How could i improve the first impression to my game?

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#1

Hi There,

To start of , I am a solo developer working on a racing game. i published my unfinished game as i am getting kinda tired of working on it. My game got like 97 visits now but the players are not even playing the developerstats shows that they stay for only 2-3 minutes. I know that my game lack a lot of things but i don’t think it is that bad and that not interesting.
This is my game :WOR:World of Racing - Roblox
and i hope you give me an honest opinion about it , I want my game to get better and reach high potentials!

I hope you give me suggestions and ideas as i strongly appreciate them!

Thank you a lot for helping me out!!

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#2

esta bueno el juego pero le falta algo por ejemplo mejorar el manejo o el dinero inicial o poner mas autos pero esta bueno par a mi gusto esta bueno

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#3

If you want to improve first impressions, then to put it simply, work on the things players will see first.

  • Having an appealing thumbnail / ad
  • Making sure the players know what they’re doing (e.g. a tutorial or something similar, as it was pretty confusing to start out)
  • A reason to actually stay and not leave, e.g. some kind of immediate (and obvious) goal
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#4

thank you so much ,
i am actually not that good on making thumbnails . Do you have any idea about ways to learn it and make it appealing to people.

#5

You could start by adding to your description. Tell them what WOR even means, and what the game is about.

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#6

I’m not a UI designer but, you could think about your target audience and try to make it interesting to them. For example, if your target audience is young children you probably would want a colourful, cartoony vibe

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