How do my advertisements look? (+ some questions about advertising & my game in general)

The game is a 15v15 turf war with mainly swords and slingshots where each side tries to capture all 100 available turf, like the turf wars on mineplex on minecraft, just without the building. Turf is captured by getting kills. There are multiple gamemodes and maps, for example some gamemodes, Double Speed, Mega Jump, Icy Map. Players earn coins for getting kills and winning, and use those to buy items or crates (item store has items you find in crates at a higher price than the crate it comes from). There is also an exclusive currency, Gems, which you only really use to buy a special crate type or items if you like. There is currently one (more planned) game pass which also gives you some items, not available in crates or in the store.

You can try the game here, it usually requires 2 players to start though but I disabled that for testing

Here are two versions of an ad I made:


I’m not sure how I feel about the text, I like it but at the same time it feels kinda out of place. How do you guys think this ad would do?

Also, would a sponsor be a worthy investment? I heard they are good for games starting out, however I’m not sure if my game icon is appealing enough:

Last thing:
I’m thinking of getting somewhere between 5000-10000 robux and doing sponsors / ads for 1k every day for as long as I could. Considering the large server size required to actually have an enjoyable experience, (~10+), should I bid more per day for less days?

What do you guys think about all this? The game, the ads and possibly sponsoring it.

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I love it! I want to try your game too!

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