How Does It Look And What I Can Improve
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I don’t hate nor like it. It is in those level of common, it just feel like overused. Although the background is now, but like the avatar it self look off-putting as well as the opacity of the fog or gust
The background is bland but ok. Nothing much.
I feel like you could make the sword be pointed more downwards or upwards, and make it bigger because i literally couldn’t see it before.
And i feel like you could have made the logo bigger. If it’s a game like “Your Bizzarre Adventure” then mess with the title to give the aura that it’s the players adventure.
Apart from that, this is pretty nice! 5/10.
sorry if i seem too negative but i just want to see you improve! 
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I personally like it! The blue tone really gives it a nice touch. But there are some areas of improvement:
I feel like there’s a lot of things going on at once. It’s cool to have this, but sometimes it feels a little hard to comprehend everything that is being shown.
I also feel like the sword could be a little more prominent, especially if it has a cool design. Show it off! Maybe it could make the viewer want to try it out more.
Other than that, solid job!