I have been working on a showcase for a while now, what do you think?
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Its a little bit empty maybe you can add a wooden bride or a boat in the middle that would be very cool and can fill all the lake or add rocks. Otherwise its pretty cool 
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Heres some feedback:
The lights glow too much, if you are using neon make the color darker it’ll stay bright just won’t shine as much.
The text on signs stand out too much try to work with different fonts and colors.
Also big ol’part above the house isn’t invisible.
The dock looks nice along with the bridges, maybe just fix the lighting.
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I managed to swim under one of the invisible walls and got to the waterfall, I was able to get this shot of the game. This is more of what I wanna see instead of just trees
Anyways, this was a nice trip especially when I got to the waterfall,
Edit: Here’s a edited photo of that shot
Happy Creating,
-Sail
Thank you for your feedback. I will consider adding those things.
Thank you for your feedback. I will fix those things you mentioned. The house, I am working on in a different game and I will copy and paste it when it is finished.
For a showcase, the terrain is very nice, there is nothing to improve on from my standpoint, but other than that, the buildings and assets aren’t detailed enough for a showcase.
The lamp is ok, but the fishing rod has little to no detail, and the position of the noob is messy, along with the bridge itself.
The streetlight is an eyesore, and it is kind of weird how it was only used once. Try adding more detail and spreading it out, like some beams for effect. The signs also have barely any detail other than text.
The house does not fit at all, and the rain still seeps into the walls, probably because of the size of the particles. Either add detail with parts for the exterior and interior, or use textures. I recommend PBR textures, with or without the depth because either way, they are great to use in builds.
The trees also lean too much, and even are detached.
My last concern within the showcase is that the bridge is very bizarre and the lights below it are too strong. I saw that you tried to add detail, but it really didn’t stick out, and the detail on the rails are too thick. Also, try adding lights above the bridge for a more realistic feel that would make sense.
Other than that, it’s a presentable showcase. I hope this can help you improve greatly.
Thank you for your feedback. I will fix or work on those things you mentioned.