How does my portfolio look

Hello, I have been making a portfolio for building and testing. I think it’s a little off though and I have a few questions

  1. Should I remove most of the tested games that dont have a lot of visits?
  2. Is the pricing okay?
  3. Have I missed anything at all or something just doesnt look right

Dont mind the building section, its not done

Thanks

coolsbloxian.carrd.co.

(This is not to promote myself or seek work, this si simply just for feedback)

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I only have onething to say about it…

  • Your hired.
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Thank you lol

But is there anything wrong with it or something?

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The discord url I would put your naem there also because sometimes it wont take you to their profile (like for me atm) and also I would fix the colors a bit because its very bright.

i CAN GIVE exta feedback on discord if you want to add me:

  • Kieranl29
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Okay, thanks for the info

Sure

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Hello.

Instead of giving feedback to you (I love the website), I was wondering if YOU can give me feedback!

You can DM me:
GreenTree Gaming

I wanted you to give feedback on my roblox game! I can pay 50 (as stated in your website).

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Why not give feedback here where everyone can see it?

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Very nice portfolio, but you can improve the visual look to it. I don’t have any specific critiques, but try to look at some other portfolios with great design for it.

Half of the portfolio’s job is its first impression.

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Pet peeves:

  • image Don’t do |NAME| |NAME| |NAME|, do | NAME | NAME | NAME |.

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    image Almost couldn’t read those.

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Very nice. I’d make the ‘PRESENTING’ and ‘CONTRIBUTED TO 1.5M+ VISITS’ bold, as it’s a little hard to read with the small and thin font

The studio logo here is also hard to see against the background colour.
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This might look better with bullet points or dashes prefixing the statements & some full-stops (or commas if it’s supposed to be a list).

I’d also make these 2 titles a bit bigger (definitely, definitely include more building photos here it looks very unfulfilled).

There’s also missing full-stops at the end of the Availability & About Me section.


Finally, you should make this first sentence about weekends in the Availability section a lot clearer, keep it simple, such as “I’m unavailable to communicate on weekends, but I can still do work on the weekends”.

Other than that, looking very good :+1:

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One thing, my eyes burn from the page, please make dark mode :0

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Idk how to. I could make a button using script but I dont know how exactly

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Oh, is that how those look like? I’ll change that rq

Thanks

Will do

I was hoping you’d say devforum logo, darn.
If I can find a way to put a full background, I will change it

Oof, didnt save. Thanks for pointing it out

For the rest, thanks again!

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Right, I think I could work on the animations later

Can you answer question 1?

At least just change the colors, it burns

Animations? I just mean the looks of the website.

For question 1, just remove Project Warship, everything else looks fine

Your portfolio looks VERY good! Nice job on it!

Pis**** me off dude:

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Uh oh, whats wrong here. I changed it didnt I?