Was working on some trees for a new game i’m working on this is one I made not sure about it.
Trunk seems a little thick for the amount of leaves on top. Otherwise it looks good.
Would look good in a swamp, and almost looks like a mangrove tree. Would look very out of place anywhere else.
Thanks @lion. @Mael Yeah I was thinking it would only be good as a main show piece in a swamp or something if I add some vines and stuff or it might be good to make a forest/jungle with.
Yeah like others said, the trunk is too fat. Make sure you get the leaf/trunk ratio right, also if it is going to be held in a swamp I suggest hanging vines. Like:
Hmm looks nice but i have few suggestions
1.Make trunk more natural(less roots)
2.Make more branches.
Well that’s all,hope it helped! 
Hmm looks nice but i have few suggestions
1.Make trunk more natural(less roots)
2.Make more branches.
Well that’s all,hope it helped!
Thanks guys yeah I guess the trunk size is one reason i’m not sure about it and yeah i’ll make the trunk more natural looking. Thanks again.
Best swamp tree I’ve seen lol
Maybe a little variation in height/rotation on those trunks? I suppose it depends on the style of your game but I’d generally expect a tree to be more natural looking (meaning not perfect). The comments about the ratio of size between the trunk and the leaves are also good, make the leaves much larger and perhaps the trunk a little taller, depending on what type of look you’re going for.
I’m pretty sure he’d of built it by now 