I made a model of an abandoned house and would like to know what do you think? I’m new at building so suggest any idea.
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It’s pretty good, but the door looks odd.
Looks really nice for someone who is new at building!
I would suggest changing the boards over the windows so that each window has a slight variation. It looks kinda odd with every window being boarded up the exact same way.
Everything looks good, except the door looks like waffles, there is little detail in the middle of the 2nd and 3rd floors also looking like it’s copy and pasted. Maybe remove some windows? Broken glass rims would look nice.
It looks awesome but maybe add a lawn with some dead trees and maybe add some more shapes to the building and also the door stands out way to much but it looks great 
the door looks way too tall.
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It look nice tilt the windows a bit and change their placements.
It looks more like a city building than a normal house I’m assuming you’re going for something similar to what horror games will feature/ or have. The build looks good, but from my point of view, the house doesn’t look that abandoned it looks like a building that you’re not allowed to enter for a reason.
I think this would look more abandoned if you placed some foliage to your scene such as grass, rocks, vines, trees. Add parts on the ground depending on how long it’s been there you could add broken objects on the surface shattered window pieces so it could stand out more.
Otherwise, I would suggest you add more items just to make it look more decent. I would play around with the different selections to capture whatever approach you’re trying to achieve from this!
The door frame would look better if it was not a story high.
Please consider using custom textures and not roblox’s textures!:
https://www.roblox.com/library/2216332993/textures