How is this icon?

02_t · March 27, 2019, 2:05pm

Do you guys like this game icon I made? Is there any way I can make this better or improve myself in the future?

B_uri · March 27, 2019, 2:17pm

Pretty nice, I like that! I wish you continued success.

02_t · March 27, 2019, 2:19pm

Thank you very much ! I appreciate that!

B_uri · March 27, 2019, 2:21pm

Keep improving yourself, I’m sure you’ll be a good designer.

DutchDeveloper · March 27, 2019, 2:22pm

use instead of an R15 model the R6 and subdevide the Limbs, then just move/rotate them into place, aswell use denoising with cycles render.

02_t · March 27, 2019, 2:24pm

Okay, I will do that in my future GFX designs. Thank you for the tip!

ScytheSlayin · March 27, 2019, 2:52pm

In my opinion this Dosent fit in well,
Maybe remove it? Or put it on letters? Your choice

SkyChillo · March 27, 2019, 3:52pm

Looks amazing. I like it I dont think there is anything to add to it or change,

Polyheximal · March 27, 2019, 4:21pm

Looks nice, especially the render. One thing that bothers me is the text. I’m not sure how you could make it better because I’m not a designer but you should probably start by putting it in a meaningful place instead of just randomly in the “middley-top” of the icon. However, really love the render!

Edit: Looks like there’s quite a bit of noise still on the render?

PurpSinister · March 27, 2019, 4:41pm

I feel as if one of the letters in “Gun” could’ve had a more creative design to it. For ex: converting the u into a minigun shooting bullets.

“Script” ‘s color scheme could’ve been experimented with. LUA’s main colors are white,blue so a gradient effect might’ve made it pop more.

Yutube_SB101 · March 27, 2019, 6:14pm

The character himself is not bad. Though you should really use an R6 rig in blender cycles. Also the character has a lot of noise on the surface. Try to reduce it a little. As for the font you used, it looks kinda plain. If you have Illustrator you should offset its path and give it some more fun details. But the icon is decent, with those things fixed it should look good.

iileviqx · March 27, 2019, 9:39pm

My feedback:

Good feedback:

I like it. To me, it is quite appealing to the eye.

The fire and the letter “G” personally juxtaposed effectively.

Improvements:

Is there perhaps too much noise?

But apart from that, I like it!

lSteveRogersl · March 28, 2019, 12:31am

The icon looks great all in all in my opinion. However, to improve it, I feel that the text could pop out a bit more. The borders of the text (especially in “Scripts”), seems to kind of blend into the background a bit. I also think an R6 character would’ve made for a cleaner render than the R15 character.

All in all
Great job. Even though there’re some areas to improve I’d give it a 9/10.

Inspirre · March 28, 2019, 12:36am

All do respect. Though this doesn’t look like a GFX… To me it looks like it’s from Roblox studio. And you posed the character how you wanted it to be and added a minigun with it. Then exported to Blender and just rendered with a PNG background.

You should try to learn to use the tools in blender. So it would be less obvious!

Example of one of mine:

(You can’t see the R15 character parts).
Overall looks nice, just get rid of R15.

PurpSinister · March 28, 2019, 1:29am

In your opinion, would it be better to model with R6 or R15?

uJordy · March 29, 2019, 10:12pm

Good graphics but there is a lot of noise on it. Try to reconfigure your lighting

02_t · March 30, 2019, 11:18am

Thank you everyone for the tips! I will definitely improve myself thank to your advice!

slothfulGuy · March 31, 2019, 1:13am

What are you specifically looking for to improve? Or is it just overall design? Maybe, you can try to provide us a theme, choices of colours, or style of the game, so we can base our feedback from the information given.

I believe that text will be your game name, and the font looks interesting. In my opinion, the pink-reddish shadow could be changed to other colours because it blends too much with the background and it’s good to show some contrast for the text. You can also see if your font is large enough to be noticeable by players. The character holding the gun looks cool to me, I like that fire on his hat. Make sure you leave an impression for the potential players that can draw them back to your game.

Also try to upload the game icon and see for yourself. Ask yourself for a few simple things.

Would a potential player be interested that much to click on my game icon?
How attractive is my game icon?
Does this game icon expresses any parts of my game?

Visit Experience Icons | Documentation - Roblox Creator Hub if you haven’t.

Good luck designing!

M_walker3 · March 31, 2019, 7:14am

Love it but it looks like your about to learn how to script a gun!

Whimy · April 3, 2019, 1:38am

I feel an easy and quick improvement would be to line up the text, opposed to having “Gun” further to the left. This will get rid of the cramped look around the character’s head and just help the entire icon look cleaner imo.