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#1

Hey, NextTimeEatASalad here,

A little backstory before I show you the image.
Basically, this is supposed to look kind of like a solitary confinement cell, but still with some color and still fairly large.
How can I improve this? It looks boring.

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(PLEASE CHECK OUT THE NEVER VERSION THAT I UPLOADED IN THE REPLIES)

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#2

the image is uhh… still processing

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#3

can you send link to image through gyazo or something

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#4

Oh, whoops. Sorry, Let me fix that.

#5

better lighting and its fine. I would make everything white cuz that’s how it was for sreious crimes back a long time ago but ur choice

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#6

Make it better textures, and better lighting, use different materials, and try the 2022 material service materials, it would make the look better

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#7

Just a couple suggestions:

  • It looks like 2 couches on the right side. If someone was in solitary confinement they’d probably have just the bed and a single chair, perhaps with a simple desk bolted to the wall.
  • They’d need a toilet and sink as well.
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#8

Uh heh, I did not read this, so I thought its a party hall sowwy

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#9

For a solitary confinement cell, this seems pretty big.
I’d remove the couches on the right and maybe the tv, and instead add a desk, a chair, a toilet, as well as maybe a shelf on the wall(or a box for storage) and a camera in one of the corners of the room.
I’d also make the room much smaller, comparing this to an actual cell.

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#10

Here’s some things I would like to point out:

  • Room is very big for a single cell, make it smaller.
  • Use custom textures (use PBR if you’re going for realistic), everything looks like the same.
  • Add details like some dirt, cracks, and other stuff like that; it looks too clean, doesn’t give off a solitary confinement cell vibe, more of a hotel room vibe.
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#11

Make it all white and add one-way glass (also white, ABSOLUTELY NO MIRROR) and white rice. No context because I’ll probably be put on some list for my research.

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#12

Here’s the newer version.

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#13

Don’t you think its like a ghost room, and look scary and creepy huh

#14

I think you need to make it smaller and add less towards it (the table is a bit big) but, It depends on what type of Solitary Confinement Cell this is supposed to be. If it’s supposed to be a mental hospital, I would recommend changing the lightbulb, and adding bigger light fixtures, like ones you would see in the hospital hallway. If this is supposed to be like a prison cell, you should add a lighting fixture near the door as the only light, while there is a small table next to the toilet. and if it is for a prison I recommend making it look very old, with scratches, cracks, etc.