How to make this animation better?

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#1

Hey everyone! I’m working on a first person animation for a laptop system, and this is the restult I got:

While I plan on adding some extra details, such as a slow FOV zoom and screen effects, I also feel like the animation itself needs some more attention, but I don’t know how, and it’s very hard to find references for such a specific thing.

Any help would be highly appreciated!

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#2

Try moving the hand back to it’s original place after holding the laptop, maybe?

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#3

If finding references is the issue, maybe you could record a video of yourself opening a laptop to reference from?

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#4

I feel like more bounce and drag would be nice

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