How would I make this more "horror like"?

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#1

Hey!

I am building a underground type area for a horror thing showcase I would like to do. Someone please tell me how I could make this any more horror like, or what things to add.

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Thanks in advance.

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#2

id add a more dark background area make use of particles too it gives old and eerie vibes if you make the back wall black and have smoke/fog sorta come out of it like a monster is hiding in the shadow, its really nice other wise!

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#3

Thanks! That was just a small bit of my build, when its done it will be darker that’s why there is a light to dimly light the room. I will try to add particles!

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#4

Ambient background music would set the vibe. Flickering lights would give the uneasy vibe. Also add some doors that close on their own to plant the idea inside of a player’s head that they aren’t alone here. Also, maybe add some 2 spheres to give illusion of eyes in shadow, but when the lights turn on they disappear and don’t come back when you turn them off again. Mannequins also work.

#5

I would say add some blood for the character on the left. but im not sure roblox will allow that though. other then that and the blue sky it looks really good so far. id say it even looks scary just like that

#6

I am very inept when it comes to scripting, so I will have to search up some tutorials. A flicking light is a fantastic idea, one that I will definetely try and do.

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#7

It has a little bit of blood around the arms, not much though. I think it allows blood but I am not certain.

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#8

What is this about if you don’t mind saying?

#9

im not the brightest with scripting but there are somewhat loopholes i think!

#10

I don’t really know, I have wanted to build a horror thing for ages now so I felt like doing it now.

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#11

yeah I am pretty sure it allows blood also. you should check out the dead silence game. that game has tons of violence and blood

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#12

Yeah yeah that great! But what is it about though? Psycopath… or something else on mind?

#13

I’d stay away from blood, if the OP happens to get some sort of moderation cause of blood that wouldn’t be so good.

#14

I think it will just be an abandoned tunnel that you as the player will be tasked to explore, probabally a couple jumpscares of a monster?

Edit: One of those subway tunnels, like this:

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#15

yeah your right. I would say it is better safe then sorry for taking time to make a violent game. It is odd that some games like dead silence get away and some less bloody ones dont

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#16

The build itself is a bit too clean for a horror build. I think if you corrupted the walls and add cracks etc, it would be more horror like.

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#17

You a police officer and asked to explore a tunnel where supposed murders have happened? Made that up on the spot. Try and add some creepy backstory.

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#18

maybe like an underground tunnel where a group of humans with no eyes and really pale skin stalk you throughout the map. many subterranean species go blind from all the darkness. and the monsters are humans that have lived underground for thousands of years. and digged their way into a subway system and attacked everybody on the inside

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#19

Corrupted like grime? I tried to find an image of a dirty, paint peeled of wall but I couldnt find any I wanted. I will do that again, also I will add cracks.

#20

Sounds like a good story to me!

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