Hello, this is my first post so if I did something wrong please tell me. I built an icecream truck and I would like some feedback.
Its amazing keep up the great work!.
Nice!
Just a few points to point out:
- The vehicle itself is very blocky
- For the menu, maybe use SurfaceGui instead of the 3D Text Plugin
Other than that, it’s great, I especially like the ice-cream on top of the truck.
looks awesome
only this is either i have a horrible perception of reality or there supposed to be a bit more car at this part instead of it being just glass
Oh, I see what you mean. I will add some parts there later.
The vehicle I was going for blocky and thanks for the suggestion on SurfaceGui I think I will put that on later.
it looks great! my one suggestion is to make the ‘gourmet icecream’ sign much bigger and easier to read
Hey, I’m not a builder / 3D modeler or anything, but
- The van is too edgy.
- Maybe some more lively textures?
The low poly ice cream cone doesn’t look good as a low poly mesh and should have more edges and the wheels could be used for scooters.
Cool Ice Cream Truck I Like it!!!
Ice-Scream Truck
lol , looks good could be better in terms of front glass and design.
I haven’t seen an icecream truck from where I live but this good.
Detailed from inside-outside with no textures giving off a neat minimalist vibe!
Hey! You forgot the menu! How am I supposed to know if you have the spongebob gumball eyes ice cream!
Jokes aside, looks good, my only complaints are the blocky cherry and the glass for the front of the truck combining together without that little separation, it looks a bit weird, as shown in the image below:
And the cherry can be fixed just by making the stem alittle more like this image I edited below:
(Yes, I know, beautiful editing lol.)
The menu is on the other side
Do not make cars in studio, as studio is terrible for stuff as such, but it’s not exaclty bad
The way the wheels are so out of the car seriously annoys me, and the front should be redone as, it’s really way too blocky and the headlights dont look too good on it due to them being 2 cylinders + 2 spheres