So I was making a new game which involves bombs and enemies. I got a warning because I made this note in the game. Remember, this is a story type game, where players find clues to unravel the mystery!
The words Explode and People don’t sound very good together. Eventhough it is fictional, it still promotes some kind of an idea with Bomb violence which is most likely prohibited in Roblox TOS. I honestly don’t have any ideas on how to change it up too be more appropiate. But all I can say is take it down a notch and don’t make it sound too extreme.
EDIT: Chances are it’s the “cut the blue wire” and “plant the bomb” reference. Because it sounds like instructions to make a bomb. It’s not the explode some people part.
I think it is the “explode some people” phrase, I’d suggest removing that as explosives are not banned but that phrase could be deemed malicious and a threat
Look, you’re gonna be a rookie until you can detonate a bomb at someplace big.
Why not do it at that stupid place, roblo-tech? Look, just plant the bomb before they sound the yellow alarm! Oh, and if you ever need to get out, cut the blue wire to defuse it!
No love here, Hank"
This is much better because it doesn’t directly reference violence. The note you have just crosses the line. Mine may not seem very different, but the violent overtones are not as apparent in my version.
This note dials it down to the point where moderation passed it three times by three different mods. So yes. Big solution!
I removed the love part, the exploding people part, and added that defuse part so it doesn’t sound like we’re trying to make a bomb. Case closed! Thank you guys :3