You have a lot of things going on your track, cut down on some elements, a slight compression and EQ may be useful. And reduce the volume of some elements, as they seem very loud.
Also I hear some dissonance, which doesn’t really help with the harmony, I recommend you overlook your elements so they are in the right key.
The drums match the energy on the last part, though it would help if you would introduce them a little earlier, as the build up seems very long.
I will do all of those when my skills get more better. Might take a very long time. You might want to be patient for a couple of months/years or more. Sorry about that.
I started to make music not long ago, didn’t take that much time to learn.
Look up some tutorials on basic music theory, or try to harmonise with your ears, though I really don’t recommend it.
Shouldn’t take you that long to learn how to write music, its simple once you understand the basics.
Cut down on the elements, and on a side note, maybe more bass and sidechaining for a pumping more exciting feeling.
Is there any music that inspires you? Something you want to recreate or make something similar? Once you got these ideas, analyse what those songs have and add those elements accordingly.
Keep learning, shouldn’t take that long, I only been making music for around 6-8 months, but still kind of get doo doo.
One of my first songs: (Removed to prevent stealing)
One of my latest ones: (Removed to prevent stealing)
Sure, mine also need a ton of improvement, but that’s a big improvement.
Just keep trying until you make something good. You’ll get there eventually.(Im not the one to speak though)
I agree with the guy quite a bit above me, the base and melody are very dissonant. Try following a music scale you find online or take a bit to learn how to minimize dissonance.
There is also too much going on after the third part is introduced, try to adapt your bass and other melodical instrument to your new instrument.
This song sounds GREAT! Awesome job on creating it! How long did it take to make this music? What did you make it on? What game will it be used in? I rate it 10/10!
It took… around what? 3-6 hours? I have no idea. I made it with FL Studio. This game will be used in the sci-fi game: Solarizator Inc. Plasma Facility.