I made a cart+obby+admin+roleplaying game. Feedback please🙏

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#1

(Please also comment if you find any glitches/bugs.)

Thank you!:pray:

The trailer:

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#2

The only thing I liked about the game was the starterGUI at the beginning.
Other than that, the building just looked… thrown together, like it was out of place. Do you think the players will beat the obby with no checkpoints?
Game just feels like a walking simulator with restricted access to admin. Why would players play this instead of a game that gives players more powerful free admin?
I also don’t like the use of AI for the thumbnail, description and game icon.

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#3

When I teleported my FPS disappeared wth :grinning:

#4

Thanks for your feedback!

Building: The obby is just one of the many activities players can enjoy – designed specifically for those looking for a challenging way to pass the time (hence the name “Challenging Obby”). However, the main focus is on the exploration (which ties closely to CaRM’s lore) and cart ride.

Free Admin: The admin commands are designed specifically for roleplaying purposes. Any overpowered commands would disrupt the gameplay experience.

AI: While the thumbnails and icon were AI-generated, the game’s description and logo were made entirely by us, not AI.

(Side note: CaRM was developed by a small, dedicated team without access to professional photo-editing tools.)

#5

May I please have a screenshot?

If you’re referring to the “Gameplay Paused” message that appears when teleporting to the main map, it’s a built-in Roblox feature that helps load the map properly.
(CaRM is an open-world game.)

#6

Ther’e not really much to screen shot becuase my fps just dropped significantly, although I didn’t get a roblox warning. I’d suggest maybe optimisign ur assets and scripts some how.

Sryy im not much help :sweat_smile:

#7

Thanks for clarifying @Ashtagreunited.

The FPS drop is expected while the map loads; the frame rate returns to normal after a few seconds.

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#8

simply put:

  • you use AI thumbnails with game which is an immediate turnoff to most people
  • shows guide when joining but no way to find it again when clicked X
  • prompting favorite even tho i havent even tried it yet
  • you cant even use admin in a game which advertises admin;
  • using “EXIT” doesnt highlight that you’re supposed to leave as it isnt a focus
  • overall it lacks any game design principles and will 100% fail.