I made a simple gun and wanna hear some feedback

Pls tell me how you like this gun,I m new to Building them,btw it is supposed to have no mag. cuz,it fits the Story of the game. :slight_smile:

The Images I made:

thx in advance : )

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You should add a trigger and change the material to metal.

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There is a trigger,I guess I gotta make it a bit more noticable and i l try out some metal

Here is an updatet Version

It looks a lot better! Maybe you could add some cylinders so it looks a lot more curvy.

Sure imma try that out,some Detail is Always good :laughing:

Another update,I didn t Change the form complete because I felt lazy rn,imma probably do a new one later,I added some more Detail to give it more chrachter,so give some last toughts on it pls and if you don t have anything to add anymore imma call it done for now :slight_smile:

It looks better than my first gun. Good job!

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Building is not my strong point so I have no room to judge haha. This is really good honestly but could be better with some simple changes like making it less box shaped. Good luck dude!

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Imma probably try to make it less box chape later cuz I m kinda tired rn XD and you can also Judge it,probably not as indepht as someone that knows About Building,but you still have 2 eyes(Hopefully) :slight_smile:

And i m also kinda new with Building :+1:

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The gun, visually, looks pretty confusing. You have a lot of different materials around the gun, with the body being smooth plastic, and the grip(s) diamond plate, with the stock (?) of the gun a wood material with what looks like the fabric material as well. I assume you’re going for some sort of sci-fi look. The red squares on the side look good but I’m a bit puzzled by the neon green block on the top, which I assume to be a sight? Ultimately, I would suggest simplifying the colors, materials, and profile of the gun.

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OK,I can try to make it less confusing,on the other hand it s first person,it looks a lot simpler from that perspective,anyways thx for charing your ideas with me :slight_smile:

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The body of the gun seems a bit too wide, I’d say fix the width of the weapon. Looks good though, I’d love to see the final product. :slight_smile:

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It does not really look like a gun. If you want a good, realistic gun I suggest using blender.

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I would agree with @Luxorz. Either use a free model and customise it or take it slow and use blender. :+1:

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The Gun

If this is your 1st attempt at a gun itself, it’s a very good start. To me and some others, the model really doesn’t look like a gun itself. You can either get inspiration from an existing model, or make the gun itself in blender to look realistic.

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