I made a store and I want people to review it!
It might look weird because this is my first build.
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7/10 for a first build, this is alright!
Work on:
Add more detail into the walls instead of two lines
Use SurfaceGUIs and TextLabels instead of using blocks to make words
Try different textures!
That’s what you should mainly focus on for a bit before adding anything else.
Good luck on the work ahead 
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Very good build!
Tip: to easily make 3d text (store sign) use this plugin ThreeDText 2 Plugin: Create Text With MeshParts!
It looks really nice! You should probably add more detail to the sides rather then lines, maybe windows? Lots of shops where I’m from do this
And also a good idea would be to try different textures as @1x1_Scripted said