I made this homestore for a person, is it good? The group I made it for is Goshikku, go check them out if you want!
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You should make the outside buildings more detailed but byes this is good
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I’m gonna be honest I don’t like it
why is it in the sky? and the spawn locations look strange
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I personally don’t like it. The color scheme isn’t very good and it doesn’t look detailed.
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It looks pretty poorly made but then again, the camera is far away from the build so it might be better than I expected.
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I recommend using references in order to help with detail. I also think if it is in the sky, maybe make it more sky themed or add some kind of ground for it to sit on. Hope this helps!
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i do not like it. very basic, text is bad, spawn looks weird, 3/10
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The homestore is too plain, you could try adding some textures to it. I also recommend using a different choice of colors.
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Well for my opinion it isn’t very good so a 4/10 cause the outside of it but hey you did good on this just make some changes.
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Looks pretty good for a start. I like the color scheme and the sort of balcony type deal you have going on between the rooves, and the unique spawns. Although, it is very simple and plain. Putting more detail into the platform you spawn on (maybe some rounding with cylinders or glass railings, similar to the railings on the balcony), and giving the actual homestore some materials/style. Also, I can’t even tell, but is that text on the left and right of the avatars? If so, that’s way too small to read. Although the screenshot is taken from a far away perspective you wouldn’t normally see, If it’s a homestore, you would usually want the text to be bold and brash.
There’s a lot to unpack here. It shows great potential, but I’d strongly suggest implementing some of the following:
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Have a ground, just to add a little more depth and reality to it. Unless if it was asked to be that way. If that’s the case just try to make it a little more appropriate to the environment.
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Try making it less blocky, add some extra details, smoother roof, etc.
Other than that I don’t know what else to add since it’s clear you’re still a beginner when it comes to building and need more experience! I love the idea. Keep up the good work.
That looks waaay too small for a homestore. And there’s like no detail. The spawns look out of place.
Hello there, this build seems fairly basic and confusing.
- Why is the skybox above the clouds - is it a futuristic homestore?
- The color scheme is odd (in my opinion) - do they have certain meanings / reasons?
Also, could you get closer up shots of the actual homestore?