I’ve recently been trying to improve my GFX skills, and this time I decided to edit the render because editing seems to be a big component in a lot of GFXs.
It turned out decent, yet something doesn’t look quite right, so I decided to post this and ask for feedback.
(The software I used to edit this was photopea)
Improved version:
Any additional feedback is appreciated!
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This looks nice! I would consider making the render larger to take up more space. Usually in these kinds of icons the render takes up most of the space. (Example, not mine: 
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Pretty decent, you should always make the head face the camera though unless it’s a thumbnail or something.
Wow Very Nice Keep it up
9.5 /10
Maybe you should
give some stroke to the character
a white border around the character
Oh, yeah, I remember what that means now. I’ll make sure to add that to the GFX. Thanks for the feedback!
I’ve added a edited version with all the suggestions so far. If there still is something to be improved, please tell me what I could do to improve it!
The lighting is way too yellow and dark, try brighten it up a bit.
I made it a bit lighter and less yellow, does it look better?
Still pretty yellow, take away the yellow lighting altogether.
I edited it again, does it look better?
It’s much, much better now. 9/10
Alright, thanks for the feedback!
I don’t like the first one like at all (lol). The avatar seems like the same colour as the background. I like your second one where you added an outline. I would try experiment with different colour outlines for you avatar!
Yeah, as soon as I made the improved version I realized how yellow I made the first one lol. I’ll definitely try to see which color outline fits it the most. 
