I need advice from you guys on my prison-based game!

I’ve been working on this Prison based game for quite a while and I wan’t your guy’s advice.

Here is the Security room:

This is the Communications room:

This is the break room/ eating area:

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more detailed footers and headers. (The thing at the bottem and the thing at the tops) image

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Okay thanks for the advice! I’m gonna try doing that!

If possible;

  • Add more details to the walls just like JackADevil said, headers would be nice to see…

  • And if possible add more details to those lights, they just look plain being like an white brick, it really caught my eye when I first saw it, lets say, maybe you can add something holding them, or something along those line…

Overall, the build looks pretty good, good job!

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For the first picture, it seems like the lights are a bit small for the room. If the ceiling light was a bit bigger, it could look better based on the dimensions you have made the room. For the area involving the desks and monitors, I can’t explain much but would recommend searching for reference images as it could help make it more detailed. The look here looks a bit retro for old-styled prison games. You could also add drawers under the desk and a trash bin next to it.

For the second picture, same with what I said with the first, the lights look a bit small for how big the ceiling is. The communications room looks pretty good. Chairs and tables look a bit simplistic but that may be the route you are going.

For the third picture, you could add cabinets above the counters and cabinet doors below on the counter. Doesn’t have to be great detail but I feel it could add. Also, I feel for a kitchen, you could probably do planks, or maybe even wood with little spaces in between each floor board to make it looks like a nice floor.

But yea, looks pretty good. I’ll assume it’s gonna have a simplistic theme to it. I wish you the best of luck with it!

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Looks pretty good! My only suggestions are, like @JackADevil and @MatkeFTW said, make the walls a little more detailed, and try to make the prison a little less blocky. But other than that, It looks pretty good! :smile:

Roof walls and floors need more detail, try adding a decal/texture if you don’t find anything fitting.

what do you need advice on, your supposed to tell us what you want us t help you with

Thanks dude! I’m actually going for a more “Blocky” style than other modern games, Because I prefer those in my favor.

Security Room
It’s a good start, but there is a lot of open space. I would try adding some more things to it, more security type things. The walls also are a little open, I can only see 2 paintings, and the rest of the wall is just open. Maybe try some of these.

  • Couches
  • Broken parts of the walls
  • More security monitors/chairs
  • A room where the security can talk and such

Communications Room + Break Room
I don’t have much to say, but the room looks pretty small. I would add more of those communicators/data things seen in that room, etc.
I would add a couple more things to the break room like some of these

  • Cabinets
  • Stove
  • Oven
    etc
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