I need feedback on my ROBLOX promo

I have made one of those ROBLOX promos that advertise the game. I need feedback on what I could do to make this better! Here it is:

I call it “The Ideas Are Endless…”

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It looks pretty great!
But I think the logo would look very nice if you change it to white!

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How are they holding the swords? Specifically baconhair

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What do you mean by that? Explain further.

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The hand is rotated weirdly. I think it should be more like the pirates’ hands to make it seem like it’s actually holding something.

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The lighting is really harsh and the grey roblox text doesn’t fit in very well, you could also add more characters and interactions going on to represent the size of servers and how there is always something going on for players to do.

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