if you can give some feedback on my showcase that would be great!
here is the link.
When creating this I took inspiration from Toyokawa Inari Shrine, made by @nezko
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I checked the place out, and I genuinely think it’s a pretty good showcase! However, there were a couple of things I found out during my gameplay that I think could use some tweaking.
- There’s no skybox! It’s not much of a problem, but it’d feel much more immersive to not see the default Roblox sky.
- The trees are quite repetitive. With them taking up a good third of the island, I really feel as if there should be a couple more variants to the trees. There might actually be variants already, but if so they’re barely visible.
- This teapot emmits a lot of particles, but it feels almost anticlimatic that the classic teapot overheating sound doesn’t come along with it. If that noise does end up distruptive for such a calming game, though, it might be better to get rid of the effect all together.
- The neat piano tunes get a bit annoying as you explore the island. The music doesn’t really fit with the theme of a rural japanese island.
To end it off, I’d just like to point out that this is all my opinion. There’s no right in what I’m saying, it’s just what I believe can be improved. It’s a really calming showcase, though. Great job so far. 
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This is very excellent! I don’t see anything that needs changed Keep up the good work.
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thanks. I appreciate the support.
OK I will take thees things into consideration. thanks for the feed back.