This was my first attempt at creating roblox graphics. I have done other GFX in the past but never with roblox.
I would love to know what I can improve on to make the art better and draw more clicks! All feedback is welcome.
Thanks!
looks really nice! I suggest a black and green background to have a night vision effect, to make it feel more military-like. Besides that pretty good! 
I was considering that but my friend told me purple pops more so I went with it… I think im going to revert to the green to give it more a military feel thanks for the feed back!
also maybe adding a night type feel by lowering the brightness, would make it look better. Maybe an actual background like a train station, he is infiltrating. Also maybe some other people behind him.
Also can you post the updated icon once your done?
That’s such a good idea!
Ill diffidently post the updated one when I’m done
Looks nice! The rig for the render could be improved though and same with the text. The colors in the text look really good but the font is a bit dull.
I would suggest using this tutorial to improve the render.
Ill be sure to improve the render! Any font suggestions?
I don’t know many fonts, and don’t design UI much so I can’t help you with that, sorry.
All good! Thank you for the feedback
maybe the font could be a bit more broken up, to make the feeling of grit (since this is military related). Also is the game out to play? It looks interesting.
Hello! Thank you for the response! I can try to break up the font a bit more to make it look more war like. And the game is not fully out it still has alot it need but I do have it set to public for anybody who wants to give me feedback!
Link: Ultimate Military Tycoon (Beta) - Roblox
If you find any bugs or anything that should be fixed please let me know! The full game wont release for around a month.
