Hello guys recently ive been dedicating a lot of time to modelling in blender and building low-poly here is a little fps map “Train Wreck” pretty much blue vs red, 4v4 thats why the map is so small also im very aware this isn’t the best work of mine but its the best fps map ive done here is some pictures of it
Any feedback on this build is of course appreciated!
Looks good, just maybe you should add more stuff to it.
Thank you and that was exactly what i was thinking!
Looks good. You could possibly add a station car on the tracks in the middle. This could add some space for the middle and help with gameplay. You could also add scaffolding that leads to higher ground. Just some thoughts, hope this helps.
Nice! Looks good as there is lots of places to run around, hide, etc… I do however agree with @6wx5 and @Cipheran, I think it needs some more stuff to fill the space, so you dont constantly come across the same people (really easily). Aside from that, looks really good!
Well, at the start, it’s pretty well made I just feel like the structure and main layout is a little off as you can see, you only have a few cover options which will not be enough to survive normally when I see “fps map” the design is expanded larger holding a few things that they can get cover or sneak to the other teams base something like that could work.
while yours is good, but it looks map and the colors are dull, consider experimenting into the use of brighter colors or materials something like that could work.
The layout of the place looks good I would consider adding a few more cover objects such as containers, wood pieces they can walk over to the other side different objects such as parts, buildings maybe broken parts on the floor something to make it less empty, and plain looking however, something in the image below could give you a good understanding on what I’m talking about such as the containers and other things to add to your game to make it even better.
Overall at the start I like the overall design hope to see the final results of the place I would be interested.
I’d work on the lighting. Generally, colorfulness and low-poly go together, so it can make your map look a lot better.
It looks good, but I think you could add some things. A train station on the side would add more detail and instead of having those cable cars or whatever they are called near the back, spreading them out randomly would make it seem less open and that’s what this map needs as the second you step aside from the train cart things, you are left wide open and there might as well be nothing there.
Hope this help 
Look good, but maybe add more stuff and details, like tunnel at the start and the end of the railway, and maybe some decal on wall like the pics.
It’s okay, a little bland though. You could add more to it as 90% of the map is container boxes. Make the map larger, the container boxes more detailed, add more cover, design like street lamps,manholes etc. good job though
