I need some feedback on my very first game

I need some feedback on my very first game. I’m a fairly new game developer and would like to get better. I’ll also be adding badges and game passes very soon. Thank you!

Game link: https://www.roblox.com/games/5086548243


Maybe some decoration around the obby.

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Thank you so much for the feedback! Definitely attending to that very shortly.

And maybe you can make some parts that slowly disappear when you touch it.

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Ah I see, seems like a great suggestion. Thank you once again!

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maybe change the skybox into something a little more interesting

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All obby’s are very similar to each other, try to make yours different and listen to @blueCoolDude26 and @Volt256

It’d be nice to see an obby which is unique, most are very similar and sometimes complete copies. Maybe adding a twist to the game would make it stand out from others and improve general skill.

Nice work, good luck! :smile:

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Thank you so much for the feedback!

Thank you so much for the feedback.

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Change the layout a bit, so its not going straight for the entirety of the game. Just looks boring. And add some maybe variations, like disappearing parts, spinning parts, moving parts. Y’know, the basics. I suggest checking the game “The Tower of Hell” out, there you can see what makes a good obby.

But other then that, looks really nice!

Yeah. I definitely agree. Thank you for the feedback!

It’s quite simple, the obby is going straightforward and has 0 challenge to it. Wasnt super fun, you could definitely add to it. Try to add more parts and make your obby more unique

Thank you for the feedback! I’m currently thinking of ways to make my obby different from others.

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I think that loading screen is a little out of place…

Watch the video for more…

some info from last post…

everything else is fine, thanks for reading!! :grin:

Oh alright, I’ll fix it very soon. Thanks for informing me!